After completing my pitch on the 20th of May, here is the feedback I received from my teacher and peers:
TEACHER FEEDBACK:
Good research and case study analysis.
Like the idea of the black and white, empowerment, suited- challenging representation.
Musician/style? make sure it doesn't look like a music magazine.
30Seconds-getting ready for the tour.
Style of her film.
My teacher approved of my ideas - she just told me that I need to decide on a magazine name as I was struggling to find one that fits my brand identity, and to make sure that one of my magazine ideas - to show a musicians fashion whilst on tour - still presents itself as being about fashion and not music.
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